The Right of Princes
Posted by admin on December 15th, 2008 filed in The StoriesFrom the male POV, this story is something very experimental for the chef. A bored prince goes seeking entertainment, and finds far more than he expected. First night turns into a nightmare.
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Young/ Funny / Witch school / First person
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December 16th, 2008 at 11:56 am
Your accent is blooming waves of pleasure in my loins
December 16th, 2008 at 11:58 am
You should set a topic to this button adding a site to StumbleUpon, right now it adds to UnknownTopic – I don’t think you’ll get a lot of traffic that way…
December 16th, 2008 at 12:17 pm
Why I somehow thought what would I choose to do – I think I’d rather die because of magically exchausting dreams as a man with succubi/wytches than die of old age
At least in your universe and dreams narrated by you, Philippa. A dream within a dream within a dream – I woke up to a similar finale…
December 16th, 2008 at 3:45 pm
Um, wow… this one was something else. If you’ve got to go, what a way. And if you have to have a near death experience, again, what a way to go.
December 16th, 2008 at 3:54 pm
I know you were worried about narrating as a male character. You need not have. Having a male main character was not a problem. The story was so well written and engaging that the imagination took over and I saw the character rather than you. No mean feat, especially since I’ve actually met you in person.
The story was amazing. And just when I was thinking, what a way to go, you throw in a twist that makes me wonder what would happen after this story was over.
Great job! I’m looking forward to sampling the next item you cook up.
December 17th, 2008 at 9:24 am
Whew! Like all good writers, you can transcend the voice and really tell the story. I was totally absorbed, and while it was odd for me to hear a woman complain about a hard cock
I don’t think that the narrative voice suffered at all. If anything, there was something even more erotic about it.
Then again, I think that Pip reading a steak menu would capture my rapture..
Not only am I amazed by each performance, I’m amazed you are able to turn these around so quickly and professionally. Stunning all-round.
December 17th, 2008 at 8:52 pm
Pip, well done. This is the best one yet. Any worries you might have had about speaking for a male were needless. You did a remarkable job. Did you add a bit of husk to your voice? It sounded like it, but nothing that took away from your narration. It worked. My only suggestion would be the constant use of the word “cock”. I’m not sure how many other words there are to use for penis that don’t come off sounding silly, but hearing that word used so often was a touch off-putting. Other than that MINOR quibble, I very much enjoyed your efforts. Bravo.
December 18th, 2008 at 8:25 pm
Pip… wonderful job again! And I love the twist at the end.
December 20th, 2008 at 4:33 am
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April 5th, 2009 at 7:09 am
What a wicked morality tale you’ve given us. Both the writing and the audio imput really allowed me to visualize each character as well as their surroundings. I felt like I was under those furs with the Prince and his witches.
I do agree with Justin’s thoughts on the word ‘cock’. It’s hard (no pun intended) to write sex scenes without over using some words but ‘cock’ and ‘wet’ are the two that I see most. On the other hand, a male character that acts like your Prince might think in terms of his hard cock all the time…I wonder if that was your intention all along.