Comments on: The Right of Princes http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/ Fantasy erotica, created monthly from listeners' survey Thu, 22 Jul 2010 12:36:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Nicole http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-160 Nicole Sun, 05 Apr 2009 14:09:21 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-160 What a wicked morality tale you've given us. Both the writing and the audio imput really allowed me to visualize each character as well as their surroundings. I felt like I was under those furs with the Prince and his witches. I do agree with Justin's thoughts on the word 'cock'. It's hard (no pun intended) to write sex scenes without over using some words but 'cock' and 'wet' are the two that I see most. On the other hand, a male character that acts like your Prince might think in terms of his hard cock all the time...I wonder if that was your intention all along. What a wicked morality tale you’ve given us. Both the writing and the audio imput really allowed me to visualize each character as well as their surroundings. I felt like I was under those furs with the Prince and his witches.

I do agree with Justin’s thoughts on the word ‘cock’. It’s hard (no pun intended) to write sex scenes without over using some words but ‘cock’ and ‘wet’ are the two that I see most. On the other hand, a male character that acts like your Prince might think in terms of his hard cock all the time…I wonder if that was your intention all along.

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]]> By: Mildred http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-117 Mildred Fri, 19 Dec 2008 03:25:00 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-117 Pip... wonderful job again! And I love the twist at the end. :) Pip… wonderful job again! And I love the twist at the end. :)

]]> By: Justin Macumber http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-116 Justin Macumber Thu, 18 Dec 2008 03:52:51 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-116 Pip, well done. This is the best one yet. Any worries you might have had about speaking for a male were needless. You did a remarkable job. Did you add a bit of husk to your voice? It sounded like it, but nothing that took away from your narration. It worked. My only suggestion would be the constant use of the word "cock". I'm not sure how many other words there are to use for penis that don't come off sounding silly, but hearing that word used so often was a touch off-putting. Other than that MINOR quibble, I very much enjoyed your efforts. Bravo. Pip, well done. This is the best one yet. Any worries you might have had about speaking for a male were needless. You did a remarkable job. Did you add a bit of husk to your voice? It sounded like it, but nothing that took away from your narration. It worked. My only suggestion would be the constant use of the word “cock”. I’m not sure how many other words there are to use for penis that don’t come off sounding silly, but hearing that word used so often was a touch off-putting. Other than that MINOR quibble, I very much enjoyed your efforts. Bravo.

]]> By: encaf1 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-113 encaf1 Wed, 17 Dec 2008 16:24:41 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-113 Whew! Like all good writers, you can transcend the voice and really tell the story. I was totally absorbed, and while it was odd for me to hear a woman complain about a hard cock :) I don't think that the narrative voice suffered at all. If anything, there was something even more erotic about it. Then again, I think that Pip reading a steak menu would capture my rapture.. ;) Not only am I amazed by each performance, I'm amazed you are able to turn these around so quickly and professionally. Stunning all-round. Whew! Like all good writers, you can transcend the voice and really tell the story. I was totally absorbed, and while it was odd for me to hear a woman complain about a hard cock :) I don’t think that the narrative voice suffered at all. If anything, there was something even more erotic about it.

Then again, I think that Pip reading a steak menu would capture my rapture.. ;)

Not only am I amazed by each performance, I’m amazed you are able to turn these around so quickly and professionally. Stunning all-round.

]]> By: David http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-110 David Tue, 16 Dec 2008 22:54:59 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-110 I know you were worried about narrating as a male character. You need not have. Having a male main character was not a problem. The story was so well written and engaging that the imagination took over and I saw the character rather than you. No mean feat, especially since I've actually met you in person. The story was amazing. And just when I was thinking, what a way to go, you throw in a twist that makes me wonder what would happen after this story was over. Great job! I'm looking forward to sampling the next item you cook up. I know you were worried about narrating as a male character. You need not have. Having a male main character was not a problem. The story was so well written and engaging that the imagination took over and I saw the character rather than you. No mean feat, especially since I’ve actually met you in person.

The story was amazing. And just when I was thinking, what a way to go, you throw in a twist that makes me wonder what would happen after this story was over.

Great job! I’m looking forward to sampling the next item you cook up.

]]> By: Brandon http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-109 Brandon Tue, 16 Dec 2008 22:45:34 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-109 Um, wow... this one was something else. If you've got to go, what a way. And if you have to have a near death experience, again, what a way to go. Um, wow… this one was something else. If you’ve got to go, what a way. And if you have to have a near death experience, again, what a way to go.

]]> By: Miranda McKennitt http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-108 Miranda McKennitt Tue, 16 Dec 2008 19:17:23 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-108 Why I somehow thought what would I choose to do - I think I'd rather die because of magically exchausting dreams as a man with succubi/wytches than die of old age :-) At least in your universe and dreams narrated by you, Philippa. A dream within a dream within a dream - I woke up to a similar finale... Why I somehow thought what would I choose to do – I think I’d rather die because of magically exchausting dreams as a man with succubi/wytches than die of old age :-) At least in your universe and dreams narrated by you, Philippa. A dream within a dream within a dream – I woke up to a similar finale…

]]> By: Miranda McKennitt http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-105 Miranda McKennitt Tue, 16 Dec 2008 18:58:10 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-105 You should set a topic to this button adding a site to StumbleUpon, right now it adds to UnknownTopic - I don't think you'll get a lot of traffic that way... You should set a topic to this button adding a site to StumbleUpon, right now it adds to UnknownTopic – I don’t think you’ll get a lot of traffic that way…

]]> By: Miranda McKennitt http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/2008/12/15/the-right-of-princes/comment-page-1/#comment-104 Miranda McKennitt Tue, 16 Dec 2008 18:56:34 +0000 http://www.eroticaalacarte.com/?p=24#comment-104 Your accent is blooming waves of pleasure in my loins ;-) Your accent is blooming waves of pleasure in my loins ;-)

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